Clarity in Language - "McDonald's Fries the Holy Grail for Potato Farmers" and other Crash Blossoms - Professor B's World of Legal Writing
 
With the simple addition of "are" before "the holy grail" ambiguity suggesting that McDonald's is deep frying a sacred vessel could have been avoided.

See this article from the New York Times this weekend with other wonderful examples where the removal of small key words created ambiguity of language, and a few laughs.
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